in Room 11 we have been doing a poster about persuasive and we get to write about anything but we had to put similes and onomatopoeia, adjectives.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, October 21, 2021
My Mega air poster
Thursday, September 30, 2021
MY BREAKING NEWS
We had to do a breaking news for our Cybersmart. first we had to put a sound trap for a breaking news sound because we couldn't find a sound so we had to put a random sound to fit it.
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Friday, September 17, 2021
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Onomatopoeia
we have been looking at ways to add impact to our narrative We found that onomatopoeia enchances our stories.
Tuesday, September 7, 2021
Baking Chocolate CAKE/MUFFINS
in lockdown i have been doing Baking with my mum and we decided that we can bake Chocolate muffins and cake. here are some pictures.
Friday, September 3, 2021
Thursday, September 2, 2021
Minecraft Challenge
in room 11 we have been doing a Challenge in Minecraft we had to make a Wesland. here are some photo's
Wednesday, September 1, 2021
Tuesday, August 17, 2021
Thursday, August 12, 2021
MY NARRATIVE WRITING
My dad was very helpful when I needed help with my homework and some chores. Then suddenly two days later I could see that dad was a bit different when he yelled at me for nothing. It turned out dad had a clone, then the bad stuff happened. It began chucking things around while I was in bed sleeping when I heard something fall on the floor. I fully woke up and saw a couple of glasses on the floor broken. Then the TV fell, I got a fright. That made me scared. Then my good dad heard me scream and he came to see what I was screaming at. He could see stuff breaking on the floor and being thrown around. I could see he was frightened too but didn’t show it. My dad rang a friend for help and he came and said some words that made dads clone go away. The next day my dad put a bbq on for his friend to say thank you for helping.
My Hooks
On Your Marks get set bang I Jumped in the Ocean. Number 42 in representing for New Zealand. As on under water Athlete I sprinted and I Jumped over hurdles. Then Suddenly My Muscles Started hurting, even in my legs. I tried to ignore the pain. I couldn't see anything. but I could see black and white squares i in front of me. I saw fish and the finish line witch made me hungry. so I raced to the finish line and I won.
Tuesday, July 6, 2021
Thursday, July 1, 2021
Friday, May 28, 2021
Riroriro
in topic we have been learning about a riroriro, we have been learning how to make a slide about them, and we have been learning facts about them.
Language Features
Person: Dj
Dj is as funny as a mouse.
He is fun as a clown on a tightrope.
Dj is as smart as a scientist.
He is also cooler than a doctor.
Dj is cooler than homework.
Dj is as good a friend as my cat.
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
Dufy theatre writing
Last week Duffy theatre came to my school. Duffy showed us a show that was sooo cool.
Firstly Duffy milked Moo Moo Molly and hurt the cow. so then the cow squirted Duffy it was so funny, I laughed out loud.
Secondly Duffy went on a zoom call. he went on his device
He was learning about Moa,and Scruffy broke his Ipad by spraying hand sanitiser on it.
Scruffy went on SnapChat. She got told off. It was so funny.
Duffy really wanted to read real books. Then he zoomed for real books
Fourthly Duffy's sister Scruffy did the same thing, breaking her Ipad too.!!
After that Duffy threw Scruffy’s and his book out the window. I said Hahahaha. Then mum said do jobs for Auntie to earn new Ipads.
Scruffy always sanitised and worried about Covid. She sanitised Duffy’s new book.
Duffy went for a walk and fell down a big black hole. Duffy was so scared because there were dead Moa bones in the black hole. Then Scruffy found Duffy in the big black hole. she had to tell Aunty
They had to get a rope and attach Duffy to the rope. Then they pulled him out.
Scruffy was being Naughty and she was going on SnapChat when she wasn't supposed to.
Monday, March 8, 2021
Swimming
Yesterday Me and my class went for a swim. when i got in it was heated the pool heat was 27'c. then my Teacher Mrs Clifford took a pitcher of my hole class.





























