One minute Challenge

My Rap

 

MY NARRATIVE WRITING

 My dad was very helpful when I needed help with my homework and some chores. Then suddenly two days later I could see that dad was a bit different when he yelled at me for nothing. It turned out dad had a clone, then the bad stuff happened. It began chucking things around while I was in bed sleeping when I heard something fall on the floor. I fully woke up and saw a couple of glasses on the floor broken. Then the TV fell, I got a fright. That made me scared. Then my good dad heard me scream and he came to see what I was screaming at. He could see stuff breaking on the floor and being thrown around. I could see he was frightened too but didn’t show it. My dad rang a friend for help and he came and said some words that made dads clone go away. The next day my dad put a bbq on for his friend to say thank you for helping.

My Hooks

 On Your Marks get set bang I Jumped in the Ocean. Number 42 in representing for New Zealand. As on under water Athlete I sprinted and I Jumped over hurdles. Then Suddenly My Muscles Started hurting, even in my legs. I tried to ignore the pain. I couldn't see anything. but I could see black and white squares i in front of me. I saw fish and the finish line witch made me hungry. so I raced to the finish line and I won.