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Tuesday, March 23, 2021

Dufy theatre writing

Last week Duffy theatre came to my school. Duffy showed us a show that was sooo cool.


Firstly Duffy milked  Moo Moo Molly  and  hurt the cow. so then the cow squirted Duffy it was so funny, I laughed out loud.


Secondly Duffy went on a zoom call. he went on his device

He was learning about Moa,and Scruffy broke his Ipad by spraying hand sanitiser on it.

Scruffy went on SnapChat. She got told off. It was so funny. 

Duffy really wanted to read real books. Then he zoomed for real books

Fourthly Duffy's sister Scruffy did the same thing, breaking her Ipad too.!!


After that Duffy threw Scruffy’s and his book out the window. I said Hahahaha. Then mum said do jobs for Auntie to earn new Ipads.



 Scruffy always sanitised and worried about Covid. She sanitised Duffy’s new book.


Duffy went for a walk and fell down a big black hole. Duffy was so scared because there were dead Moa bones in the black hole. Then Scruffy found Duffy in the big black hole. she had to tell Aunty

They had  to get  a rope and attach Duffy to the rope. Then they pulled him out.

 

Scruffy was being Naughty and she was going on SnapChat when she wasn't supposed to.


8 comments:

  1. A nice piece of writing. Very well done. You have all the ideras in order and have made it interesting. Ka Pai!

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  2. tank you Mrs Clifford yeah its very intersting

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  3. Hello Shikya.
    I like the use of the words you used to describe the way that the events happened.( first,second etc)
    I really enjoyed this performance.My favourite part was when Moo Moo stood on Duffy's foot.
    What was your favourite part?.

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  4. Hello Shikya.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at you blog tonight.

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  5. Hello Shikya.
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  6. Hello Shikya.
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  7. Hello Shikya.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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