My dad was very helpful when I needed help with my homework and some chores. Then suddenly two days later I could see that dad was a bit different when he yelled at me for nothing. It turned out dad had a clone, then the bad stuff happened. It began chucking things around while I was in bed sleeping when I heard something fall on the floor. I fully woke up and saw a couple of glasses on the floor broken. Then the TV fell, I got a fright. That made me scared. Then my good dad heard me scream and he came to see what I was screaming at. He could see stuff breaking on the floor and being thrown around. I could see he was frightened too but didn’t show it. My dad rang a friend for help and he came and said some words that made dads clone go away. The next day my dad put a bbq on for his friend to say thank you for helping.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 12, 2021
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WOW Shikya! what an interesting story.You had me in suspense from the beginning.Great work. Well done.
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